Draft feedback and improvements 6

A smaller issue which was reflected in the feedback we were given for our first draft was that the titles weren't big or bold enough to have the kind of impact which we wanted to create. So in response to this we increased the size and boldness levels of the text using final cut pro text editing. This made the text stand out a lot more and made it seem more professional in its finish.
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Another problem with the titles was that half of them were put onto a black photographic background which looked very amateur. So we then decided to put them on top of moving footage, we hadn't previously done this because we had some technical difficulties in putting the text on top of moving footage but after we spent some time looking into it, we found an effective method of putting it on top of the moving footage correctly.

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