To overcome this, it made sense to add more shots of him. such as the ones of him jumping over a fence and a close up of his beaten face. This was effective in just making sure that the audience would be able to easily pick out who the protagonist was in the piece and it also added to the plot.
Monday, 9 March 2015
Draft feedback and improvements 5
A main issue with our piece was that there was not enough shots of the protagonist, that it was clear that he was the protagonist and it was important that we make it obvious that he was a key element of the trailer so that the audience could identify with him before even considering to want to watch the film.
To overcome this, it made sense to add more shots of him. such as the ones of him jumping over a fence and a close up of his beaten face. This was effective in just making sure that the audience would be able to easily pick out who the protagonist was in the piece and it also added to the plot.

To overcome this, it made sense to add more shots of him. such as the ones of him jumping over a fence and a close up of his beaten face. This was effective in just making sure that the audience would be able to easily pick out who the protagonist was in the piece and it also added to the plot.
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