Draft Feedback and Improvements 1

One of the main points made in the feedback from our first draft was that the Sound didn't match the points at which tension rose in the visual shots. This is important when trying to build the tension and trying to make the trailer enticing and exciting to watch because the obvious purpose of a trailer is to encourage the audience to watch. The urban genre requires an action feel to it with a lot of apprehending shots for example of the protagonist running or violent shots.
To improve this we changed the timing and order of some shots. For example when the classical music first explodes into a rap song, we changed it from a shot of the protagonist walking, which is slow paced and not very successful in building a sufficient excitement in the audience, to a shot of our protagonist racking lines of cocaine. This is much more efficient in emotionally arousing the viewers.


So it went from this:

To this:

Other similar changes were made at points of louder beats such as moving shots around from this:

 To this: